Cody, What an awesome background you have! It is beautiful! You really do need to proofread and use the spell-check. As far as the internet safety post (and your others), you need to add some video, pictures, music, and links and I don't mean gruesome ones either. Blogs should be more than three sentences. That might make a good comment. I know; you think I just like to talk/write too much. Not, so! Finally, remember, you're not texting. It's not costing you anything, so write out those words. Where's the music? With color like this, there should be sound. Bring it. I'll be back!
Cody, What an awesome background you have! It is beautiful! You really do need to proofread and use the spell-check. As far as the internet safety post (and your others), you need to add some video, pictures, music, and links and I don't mean gruesome ones either. Blogs should be more than three sentences. That might make a good comment. I know; you think I just like to talk/write too much. Not, so! Finally, remember, you're not texting. It's not costing you anything, so write out those words. Where's the music? With color like this, there should be sound. Bring it. I'll be back!
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